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Wind is blowing, your mind set free
You look upon the ridge and see
A girl with hair thats spun of fire
Who weeps for things she desires

Winter comes and she still stands
Waiting in this dreary land
From your hands hope does spread
To follow down the path she's tread

She is lost and can't be found
To this land her heart is bound
The hope you spread finds her mind
And tries to free her from hurting times

Her body bleeds you start to cry
You see her pain in minds eye
Why can't you make her pain disappear
Then you realize it feeds off her fear

Her body is trembling from the pain
You give her a hug but see it is done in vain
Her body grows cold, along with her heart
For body and mind are now apart

Her soul is now lost, its gone away
Its gone forever from this day
You still hold her tight and pray outloud
Please bring her back for I have vowed

"Protecting her with my life
Keeping her away from strife
Making all her worries cease
Giving her a place of peace

Showing her happiness does exsist
Making her world nothing but bliss
I'll give her love and my heart
Never shall we be apart"

Her body warms and breath does stir
Alive again is this girl
She is back and here to stay
But be warned she can go away

Love her lots or she will leave
A place in time that does decieve
Her heart has felt all sorts of sorrow
Without care she'll leave tomorrow

Keep in mind you have been warned
Already once you've had to mourn
If you do not love her truly
She shall leave your world of beauty
©2004-2009 ~whitesilkrose101
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Author's Comments

I'm not to sure of the title, let me know.

I wrote this poem thinking about things in my life and such. When I started it was meant to be all hope filled and extremely happy. As you can tell it didn't turn out that way. Since my writings normally tell people how I feel at the moment I am trying to figure out how I feel. I'm happy, but among the happiness lurks my pain and loneliness. Its sad but true. Sometimes I feel I will never find true happiness and that I will always feel alone.

:cling:

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:iconpeonygrubb:
May?!

*raises up hand* First dibs on Offical Poem Illustrator!!!!

...I win.
:iconlosna:
*teary eyes* <3

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:iconwhitesilkrose101:
Alright I'm wrong, Beth will be drawing me a better picture. *laughs*

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c('';) ('';) oh look...a bunny

Love hurts, yet we can't live without it. It's like oxygen, slowly killing us, but without it we'd already be dead.
:iconwhitesilkrose101:
thank you ^_^

guess it was sadder than I thought

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c('';) ('';) oh look...a bunny

Love hurts, yet we can't live without it. It's like oxygen, slowly killing us, but without it we'd already be dead.
:iconcheekana:
It is sad, but truly beautiful. :rose: I completely understand your emotions in this poem. Sometimes we feel happy, but if we take a deeper harder look sadness/loneliness still linger...Great poem.
:iconwhitesilkrose101:
exactly :thanks:

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and tell me what you think.

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c('';) ('';) oh look...a bunny

Love hurts, yet we can't live without it. It's like oxygen, slowly killing us, but without it we'd already be dead.
:iconsweetheart18:
Beautiful, sad, and nicely written. I love your stuff. It's like chocolate. (that's how all pieces of writing and lit should be :) I know how this is. Ya' know what I think? I think people are on the surface are happy, but deep in side we are all sad and alone. I think we can only achieve true happiness when we get to heaven. I think that loneliness we feel is our homesickness for heaven....seriously....I've felt this before and I've psyco analyzed myself enough that I've come up with this. Happiness is just fleeting. We won't know the true meaning until the next life.

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:iconnekokawai:
tis sad tragic beauty, the best kind.

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:iconwhitesilkrose101:
Chocolate? Whoa then my writing must be better than I thought. *hugs* Thank you!

I believe that your right. We all appear to be happy but inside we're all crying. We all just wish to be loved and noticed.

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c('';) ('';) oh look...a bunny

Love hurts, yet we can't live without it. It's like oxygen, slowly killing us, but without it we'd already be dead.

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